/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6969345
The first thing I notice is that the first pigs head is way too wide, same goes for it's nose. When in the initial stages, their are 2 things you need to be primarily concerned with, proportion and angles. When you make a shape, the only questions to ask yourself are whether it is too tall of too wide. Using similar landmarks in your drawing and comparing to the original reference, you've made the snout too wide. The eye is also too far from the snout. If you were to capture these relationships, your drawing would be more successful. Also get reference with clearer delineations between the light and shadow. Like this pumpkin here https://www.pinterest.ca/pin/442197257177551450/

Also avoid texture and color (unless it for fun or doodling) until you get a better grasp for grayscale painting. Those are distracting you from the real meat of the painting which are the shapes of light and shadow.