/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Two of my characters. Friendly and carefree Half-Giantess soldier and a young nobleman mage that isn't used to people treating him without formality in public.

They become good friends.

She's like 8'.

Outside of general /beg/ness are there any issues?

Picking colours. Hoping to get time to shade it.

Issues I know about
>Half giants left arm is almost apelike in length
>I lost the ribcage and shoulder mantle once I started layering on clothes and adding the interaction with the boy
>Need to work on faces
>The thick linework and hatching are on a desperate layer and will probably be re-worked once I add shading
>The gray spot on chick is gut armour that I forgot to finish on the other side of her body
>I don't know how to colour the inside of mouths

Any advice on colour picking and getting poses like this to look more natural?

I used a mashup of photo refs because I couldn't find anything like pic related.

>>5201538
Looks good man.

Simple but effect

>>5201575
I like it.