/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5199726
Thank you for taking the time to do a redline, I really appreciate it. The camera angle is supposed to be slightly above and to the side, but not very much. Here's what I was thinking with the arm. I traced over a photo I took of myself to show that it's a possible pose. The idea is that her hand is pretty close to the table, but her elbow is also resting directly on the table, which will push her right elbow farther away from her body than her left elbow is. In this position, the forearm won't cover up as much of the upper arm as you have. You positioned her right elbow as close to her body as her left elbow is, so that accounts for some of the difference in how you drew it vs how I drew it.
This camera angle is actually more extreme than what I was going for in the drawing, but a more frontal view would just show more of the upper arm. Anyway regardless of the pose I agree that my original arms don't look good and I need to change them.