/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6710404
You have a very distinctive style, you shouldn't change that. The faces are beautiful. There's something weird about the body proportions, like their bodies are too elongated, but I see what you're doing. I think you have to tweak juuussst a little bit of that. I'm not saying to change your style, please don't, you just have to tune the proportions to make it work.

The most important thing, the gesture, he's like grabbing her neck with out emotion. It is the hand position. The hand needs to have a "caressing" gesture. And also HER hand is important, so she's not hanging by her neck, in a weird way. Her breasts also looks strange, like it needs a more elegant reading of the lines.
So as you can see, I'm just advising little tiny details, your style is beautiful, tune up the proportions, to make the composition solid, and tune up the gesture, to make it 100% alluring to the viewer, without any weird second readings.
Nice and beautiful work anon!