/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

So i have been experimenting on what i think could be a new art style for a graphic novel or comic. I mostly based my art on ancient japananese ink paintings. So i would just like to know your opinion like if the style looks intresting, bland or boring etc, or some critiqeu on the figures about anatomy or use of color. What i am just showing is a start not a full comic panel. Be as harsh as you can pls. I have only focused on characters for now the backgrounds i still have to experiment for the backgrounds.