/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4495047
I don't really know what I'm doing either so I tried my hand at it as well.
I think you're thinking too much about the line/contour, it's harder with the eyes and I can't really pull it of either, but try thinking more about the forms and surrounding planes like with the nose.
Same with the mouth, planes and forms.
I actually like your nose in this one.
Try downloading Hustons head drawing course in the video course thread, he approaches the features in a structure/ form study way.
If nothing else it will give you some direction.