/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4672085
>Looking at your circles, I realize you're more like drawing ovals instead of circles in a perspective, which is what makes your drawings look flat.
so basically, things are okay, but the basic shape im using is what's throwing things off in perspective?
>Parallel lines are too straight and stiff
ok ok
so, the guidelines i establish need to wrap around the "ball"
>and your linework looks feathered and messy.
Yeah, im not really trying to keep everything pretty for now since im just trying to get placements going well and these aren't intended to be "finished" pieces.. concept art? idk