/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3033564

that comic was pure deviantart garbage tier and i deleted it, but there is another one i was making (stopped for the same reason, the drawings are at the same level) , here's a page (keep in mind that i used one of those wood puppets for proportions, and they are still garbage).
This comic was about bart going vrazy and killing everyone, milhouse was the one supposed to stop him (bart was even supposed to become bartman after milhouse trained with ralph and became too strong for him)
This is literally deviantart level trash.