/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3885866
Where is his pelvis?

1. Draw the package. It doesn't make you gay.
2. Learn how to draw continuous lines, not short segments.
3. Pay more attention to the contour.
4. Measure. The right thigh is too short.
5. Pay attention to what's actually there - the hand on the left is a decent attempt, the right, not so much.

Overlay this over the photo. You'll see where you didn't capture the form right.

It's a step in the right direction. Work on refining and capturing the form more accurately. Stop shading, or commit to shading for real, you're just distracting from the form, and making good line choices.

Part of learning to draw is learning that you don't have to represent lighting through line - and you can use a refined line with varying weight that's continuous to indicate volume. You're translating reality into line, and it takes practice - which you're doing, and it's just a matter of experimenting to figure out what to indicate, and what not to.

Try it like this (not mine) - try to get the contours. He didn't use line to indicate all of the contours, like on the chest, he focused on getting the form accurate. Things like the abs and chest can be translated to line, but not like you're doing - it takes more finesse and implied line, than what you're doing - and that's just something that comes with experience.

When you get better at that, then move into shading.