/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3686173
he loves that character and drawing her much like you did. also, as promised, here is a asd;lfj an unfortunately kinda shitty rushed redline but basically the main thing i wanted to fix was that with boobs that large at this angle they would obscure most if not all of the shoulders and also a bit of the face as well, along with the cup leaning a biiit too much forward where she'd spill her drink ;-;

>>3686475
>These drawings are months old im a bit better now.
oh hasdl;fj sorry for that but also hell yeah at improving! i hope i can always be improving too