/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Thu Mar 12 02:25:56 2020 No.4420635 [View]
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>>4420627
Some things I notice immediately:

- The pupil should not be in the front area of the iris. See pic related.
- Because we can see the inside of the ear in the other two from the front, but from profile we can see the same amount, it makes it feel like the ear is bent backwards. We should see more from the side or less from the front.
- The back of the head says she's looking up, but the front and nose says she's looking forward. If she's supposed to be looking straight, the back of the head should connect with the neck at a higher point. See pic related. If she's supposed to be looking up, angle the front of the face to match.

Honestly though, it's not bad. I'm just nitpicking because you pointed out that you think there's something wrong with it.

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