/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4497105
The main issue I'm seeing with your face is... that's all there is. She doesn't seem to have the back of her head or a jaw, she just has the front of her head i.e her face. It's kind of jarring to have such a 2D face with a 3D body. Most if not all of the anime faces you look at will show the depth of the head in some way.
I've drawn something to show what I mean, but bear in mind I'm not too confident at drawing faces myself. I find drawing a box first for the head helps, not only with representing the cranium but also with positioning/tilting the head (it looks like from your drawing you not only want her head to be resting on the ground, but also slightly turned towards the camera).
I'll post a couple of better tutorials in a minute. Keep trying to draw complex angles and shit you're not 100% sure of, it'll help you stay out of the comfort zone.