/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6273607
looks good for a sketch, i can tell you have a sense for line weight being important if you where to ink line it.
>>6274142
excellent use of black space on the motorcycle though im not sure i can say it translates the same to the clothes on the right.
>>6275322
looks great! maybe its just the photo but id like to see more darkness and definition. when i full size this image i lose what definition i can see when its thumbnail due to this.
>>6276078
pretty good curves, better than i do in traditional for sure. the lines feel heavy handed, maybe try using a harder pencil ?
>>6276084
I like the vibe of this mecha/armor stuff but maybe try practicing the 2 separately? like the others said the human proportions are off but if this was pure mecha it would be fine. you clearly have an interest in robot type stuff so why not dedicate 1 sketch book to each or force yourself to do alternating pages 'humans' 'mecha' 'humans' then once you feel you have a good grasp separately combine them like you did here.
nice shading for depth, lacks detail in areas but the overall form is spot on. id be interested to see you do a full face and see how you abilities carry over on the other side of the face.
>>6276324
cool sketches! i like the muscles. seems like a great show of practice! keep it up.
>>6276394
reminds me of my old school books filled with doodles like these. pretty fun to look at. try practicing hatching if you like to draw in a ball point pen, its useful for shading and giving alot of extra polish on a school book sketch.
>>6276416
its interesting, im not much a painting guy tho so sorry cant help much. the clouds look cool if not a bit lacking in other colors.
>>6276816
i like this one too, reminds me of the crazy newgrounds animations i used to watch. great coloring and detail!
>>6276850
is this your sketch layer? it looks like it might be. you could easily clean this up. looks good to me!

Here is one of mine