/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3483349
Proportions are pretty good, your legs may be a touch long, unless you did that intentionally to make her more attractive. Work on foreshortening and anatomy. Her right hand doesn't look like its interacting with the animal correctly. I'd also read a few books on how clothing works (id recommend "The artisys guide to drawing the clothed figure" by Micheal Massen). And for anatomy, find a digital copy of "Anatomy for Sculptors" by Zarins.

Also, try placing a rectangle before drawing the sword to make sure its in perspective. Also do some hair studies, yours has 80's levels of volume.