/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'm a painter. I have recently started this painting. It's a female with tentacles for hair. The filling of the tentacles is a galaxy.

The top right is a sea horse holding a ghost with a sailor cap.

You can't exactly tell right now, but the setting is in the sea. There will be more sea creatures and the top left will be a man in an old timey diver suit. Much like the suits seen on BioShock.

The painting will be named "Galaxsea". Sort of a pun since the woman's tentacles are a galaxy. And my signature is down bottom.

I come to ask if there are any improvements I can make to my painting?

I already see a select few. The nose chin and nose aren't precisely on the same line of focus. The septum piercing is a little too big on one side and is also crooked.

Other than that I would need help from you guys. It's still a work in progress and I would appreciate the help.