/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4998021
>>4998453
The view turned into a front view here.
You were right that it's perspective and a torso too long. You need to stack the forms quite radically to bring out the appearance of an extreme angle.
Because of how viewing angle doesn't map linearly to visible size, you'll have to do this kind of foreshortening a lot more than you'd intuitively guess.