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Anonymous Sat Nov 29 11:18:24 2014 No.1904292 [View]
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>>1904231
Its just how you developed your style, you kept the general proportions and the stylisation of the face very similar- I dislike how it turned out and would have made different stylisation choices. However, I realised that those choices are not a valid measure of improvement.

>What can I do to improve more?
maybe some variation in angle of faces and poses? all you seem to do is 3/4. your other views are lacking in >>1903929 . and also study perspective, i.e. the conflicting vanishing points of the face and body in >>1900053, refer to pic attached.

>how much improvement
all of the above

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