/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2657237
>drastically changes in weight at times (particularly in june and july) that was the intended effect
It is. Reminds me of the ed edd and eddy lineart, but while there it is kind of impressive because there is no still frame, it doesn't work with a static pic like yours.
>I don't see a lot of problems with my recent work
You are right, they look too stylized to critique it objectively, but I think there are elements that you could trhow at it to make them look better, and I think >>2656895 is one of the references you used.
tl;dr: There are elements that could make the pic closer to the references you are using.
Unfortunately I don't have references for that shinny stuff you are going (jojo manga art maybe?), and for better looking monsters there are so fucking many to choose from (my favorite monster references come from yu gi oh tho)

Also use that color wheel link I gave you. I did mean it when I said that you had something interesting going for the colors, and it can only help you. (pic related, it also has app versions)