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>>3149282
i really like your big beefy monster/possibly animal dude (i see those not quite yet clawed feet >.>) tho i did noticed you had messed up the forearms a bit anatomically as well as made them a bit too long in relationship to the upper arm, along with the close hand being a little weirdly shaped/positioned and the far shoulder being a bit outta perspective (i also made the far hand a bit bigger to be closer in proportion to redrawn hand)

as far as why i chose the bigger deltoid, i liked the way it felt proportionally with the rest of the arm and in general because of the positioning of the deltoid and how it overlaps the many muscles that tuck into/under it. i drew a quick bad sketch example of how i like to push and exaggerate the arm muscles and it usually involves squashing the middle parts of the upper arm to create a more proportionally dense feeling form

hope this helps an wasn't a complete rambly mess nwn

ALSO ALSO i really like the style and proportions you're playin with (i really REALLY like big beefy dudes), would you mind sharing a place to find more of your work, it's really cute~