/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6181655
What a tough pose you tried to draw
firstly, having characters interact, and a background is a hard to do - so nice work trying something complicated

Sadly, theres a ton of stuff wrong with this - overall everything looks stiff, disproportionate and flat

The pose is really awkward - and the limbs are really long - the cigarette character's arms would be dragging on the floor
the other characters hands look like folded paper - especially the finger holding the knife

keep trying though, it was a complicated idea and I'm sure you learnt a lot from it