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>>3364928
Excuse the shite rework, I'm quite bad at explaining unless I give it a try myself.

I get what you mean with the eye, in which case, the eye that's a bit more squinted would be a bit pushed due to the cheek and have the laugh line where the cheek is being pushed by the mouth, on the right side (like the little mark I did? Just maybe emphasise the cheek a little more)

With the head, I meant like the forehead area and where her fringe is. Her fringe looks a bit squished and flat on the top of her head, which also makes the forehead look small. I think that's just moving the top of her fringe line (between her two Monokuma hairbobbles) because Junko's fringe is pretty big and poofy. (I also poofed out her hair a bit more on her left side)/

>>3364968
Also this anon makes a point, the eyes do look off, I think it's the right eye that's badly being affected, so just double check that.

Other than that, I can't think of anything else except gimme blog.

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