/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3210005
Well you either rushed trough it or you are full of shit.

Your piece has no flow or framing

Not to mention that your strokes are taught as unfitting unless you want flow to feel going more than one direction (like your drawing does, it feels all over the place)

Try redoing it, and this time:
1-use a more interesting angle than a 3/4 view and a framing less flat of your main focus subject
2-make less effort doing your strokes, your lines look like they took effort, male them more relaxed and make 1 line with a bigger brush rather than several with a fine point pencil. Try using a crayon or a marker if you don't want brushes.