/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7159410
Align your elbow to your head and see how far the elbow ends from it. Arm's too short.
I think you would have noticed that if you gave your work a fresh look by letting it marinate and having a look at it in the next morning. Or maybe just mirroring the canvas.
Grip on the gun is weird but I'm drunk so I would not know how to be more specific, sorry.
I'm quite oblivious to composition but your piece looks odd. Remember that, since you're working on digital, you can make a big ass canvas and just crop it when you're finished drawing. I do it all the time. Maybe the short arm is a consequence of you wanting to fit it into the canvas, idk.

>>7159406
I have to agree with pawell on this one. If you don't know how to observe you don't know how to construct because guess what, you need to observe basic forms to know them enough to then use them construct.
Keys to drawing.

>>7159421
>>7159435
Check Peter Han's take on penmanship and line confidence. I think the first 2 classes are available for free on Yt.

>>7159428
Come back in 10 years.

>>7159351
Read keys to drawing if you want to stop being shit at drawing, ignore this reply if you just wanted attention.

>>7159266
If you used reference pay more attention to the reference by using the knowledge taught in Keys to drawing and apply cognitive drawing. If you used imagination draw more from reference using the knowledge taught in Keys to drawing and apply cognitive drawing. Be sure to familiarize yourself more with basic proportions before attempting any kind of perspective shenanigans.

>>7148335
It's memory, then observation, then memory. Logic behind that approach is in picrel.

Also see >>7147981

>>7130416
>>7130477
gl

>>7124609
At your level I'd suggest limiting yourself to a tool that doesn't make you worry about line weight. It keeps you honest and helps you focus on WHAT you're drawing, rather than HOW.

If you're using ref, try picrel. If you're not using ref, find one and try picrel.
If you haven't already, read KtD.

>>7123413
Drop FWAP, read KtD, then learn what you want to learn using pic related.