/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6927210
hi again, I think what I said about the curvature of the cheeks was wrong. the correct way would be it curving *below the level of the nose tip
I pulled the facial features down a bit, erased the lower eyelids (not necessary but if you want to keep them, be sure to draw the upper lids darker/bolder) and pulled the ear a bit closer to the middle of the head (the more lateral is the view of the head, the more the ear gets pushed to the middle of the head. you can also spin the ear a bit to make the jawline easier to draw
about the proportions, they're fine. in general, aim for 1.5-2 head sizes for the torso length (from chin to cunny). the head and hairline lines don't mean anything btw, I just used them as landmarks but forgot to make a new layer for it