/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1705698
Your drawing is preety good, but you don't seem to understand values and edges. What to do:

-Think of the bigger form (e.g. cylinder for the whole arm) and render it accordingly, then go for smaller details.
-Don't outline everything with a black line. Divide your image into lit areas and shadow areas and assign a value range to each area. (it's about being subtle)
-Think about the form. There is no such thing as "concave shading", just planes. Google "Ambient occlusion".
-Light intensity. The further from the light source, the darker.
-DON'T NEGLECT THE HANDS!

For hair and fur it's as easy as finding some reference and randering the bigs form first, then individual strands.