/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

i'm looking for criticism but don't rekt me too hard

also
1. something about the head/face. i thought the eyes were too far apart but they're about one eye of distance. tried lifting them but looked worse to me. maybe format of the face? not idea what it is desu
2. shadows/shading/whatever you call it is probably terrible but i have no idea how to do that shit and all the material seems to be either magic or very specific situations
3. i straight up traced stuff here, i'm mostly looking to get the proportions right at the moment while hoping to pick other skills