/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Thu May 21 07:25:26 2015 No.2093943 [View]
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>>2093696
You have perspective construction problems again.
Her upper torso is positioned right in front of the viewer, while her lower torso and legs are positioned like the viewer is standing slightly over the viewer's point of view. Her body is basically broken in two pieces.
Plus there are slight problems with the foreshortening of her arms, but this is mainly a problem because the posture is all over the place.
Check the paintover.

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