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Chin is off. The tip should be thinner than the jaw line. Here's is vice versa so she has a small jaw that sinks in. Her eye is very cute and in a great spot. I like your style. You also really need to work on line work. Make strokes fast in one go at a time and then correct them. It looks like you are moving the stylus slow to be careful but that is a rookie mistake. Make big confident strokes, then correct. Pic related is a example of more straight lines. I didn't follow your lines exactly with the hair because that is where the fast strokes took me and I liked how it turned out, not a correction on your choice of hair curls placement.

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