/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3825283
>3head
>huge eyes
>huge irises
>huge pupils
>eye shape is as if facing completely forward
>realistic sense of eye style but no thickness to the lids. If you're going to go as far as to detail tear ducts, don't skip out on the rest of the anatomy
>eyes too highs up
>tumblr nose
>concave jaw
>forehead sticks out on the side

This is all really simple stuff you can fix. Good luck with your art anon!