/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

still going after the last thread and im not feeling so good about these lines, it's taking me way out my comfort zone (which is good, but also really intimidating)

i never line my work like this (i normally sketch/shade/render in that sort of digital "painting" style a lot of people go for, i was trying to push myself to try something new) so i'm really lacking confidence as i'm trying to pull this comic together - i'm wondering if i should even bother to shade it, i feel like it looked a lot better pre-lines

if anyone has any tips to help me bring this thing to life, i'd be grateful