/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7019892
Thanks. Yeah, that’s looking way better! I like Fink, she’s cute. Good job, anon
>>7019893
Oh, no, only the ones in the bottom right quarter were 2 minutes. The others were either 5 minutes or untimed. But thanks. It’s just Hampton and Vilppu and Morpho studies to learn something of gesture and anatomy/construction and then doing lots of gestures. I honestly have been slacking on gestures recently. And helpful feedback from generous anons.
>>7019916
UOHH
>>7019927
Ah, yeah, being able to see her heels REALLY helps ground her. If you’ve already done DAB type stuff then you probably just need mileage is all. Maybe draw one or two boxes or organic forms or intersecting volumes as a warmup if you wanna get real autistic about it. The helmet looks MUCH better now, I think you should have her elbow resting on top of it more, but you could probably get away with it like it is now. Oh,my ou actually might even be able to just slide the helmet to our left a little and leave her arm where it is. That would help imo. Moving her seems to have made her a little better proportioned in relation to the bike. I think her left (on our right) hand should be redrawn a touch smaller and maybe resting on her tail or the bike or her hip or something; it currently looks a little like she’s just holding her arm bent in the air. I’m not aware of the character or the bike’s dimensions, so maybe figuring that out will help with their sizing. (Although this version looks more normal to me now.) To do the drapery, I’m sure you can find pics of women in schoolgirl outfits leaning against/sitting on various desks/objects/faces so you can get an idea of how the dress will react to disturbances. You might even ask anons for redlines, idk. I suck at drapery sadly lol.
It sounds like you’ve got a process that’s working for you, and it’s obvious you’re making great progress. >>7019930 is correct. You’re doing exactly the right thing with your art.
>>7019963
I am