/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Might be my last post in a while.

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Adorable stuff

>>6752587
I can feel your struggle, turning a bunch of ideas into a story IS difficult. A shame so much was cut from the tentacle fight, would've liked to have a taste of those G'tar-vczf cheese steaks.
In case your brain works like mine, my way to fix my artistic blocks was to spend a night brainstorming, listing all my ideas and not going to bed until I connected all the dots. Once I got the main ideas in order, I could picture the story and balance it to make it flow better.
For instance: I couldn't for the life of me find a way for Turtloli to convince Bear, and suddenly learnt that Bellboy was reduced to a bodiless head, at which point I was tearing my hair out. So I came up with the Bear clinic to cure Bellboy, which in the end fits nicely and gives Bear a reason to cooperate. Once this was settled, little ideas came after like telling Bellboy to take Senna with him (for the tongue ramp). It wasn't just because I wanted to draw Bear in a nurse outfit I swear...
Ofc no story or author is the same, so idk if my advice amounts to anything, sorry if it's a bit self-centered.

>>6780344
>90% of turtloli review is round 3 cope
Truth is, overthrowing GM was decided the instant the monsters joined the Terrible Troupe, I wouldn't be satisfied with only one team winning, everyone HAD to go home for the rpg adventures to continue. So I decided to /b/ the change I wanted to /ic/. I kinda assumed GM was going to find a bullshit way to send people home even if Chadwick won anyway, I was making the work easier for you old fuck.