/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I've been trying to do coloured pieces for a while, but honestly I'm shite at it. I thought I could skip the required study, but I'm still not where anywhere near where I want to be. I think I'm going to go back to doing lineart to try and refine my understanding of form, and only do rendering in b&w, so I'll be forced to study value.

Anyway, a few threads back somebody told me my art failed on a sexual level, so I'm trying to do some more action pieces. It was going to be a vampire, but, big lizard tails are sexy.