/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6186271
okay, some part of her hip is missing if you follow the countour of the leg in the left, then theres the fucking hands, hand in the right is broken as fuck see the ref, the other hand has the fingers with almost the same lenghtand level each, and the palm or back of the palm is too thicc looks like a potato, the legs are not really bad and it really comes to taste i guess, but the leg in the right is way too exagerated stylistically imo it looks like its melting, but that ankle is definitelly too far out on both sides so the ankle should be pushed towars the leg a bit, the neck is way too large or so it seems but i think is the jaw being too horizontal making the neck look larger also the neck should be more centered, then theres the skirt that looks flat and stiff.

Now what i would do is make the skirt twist following her legs and torso twist maybe not as exagerated as i did... then i would make the leg in the left more uhhh dynamic as the other leg because it looks off compared to the other aslo add some wrinkles on the corseth or whatever is called where the waist is turning.
oh yeah broken engrish gomen