/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3153448
Id say one can learn about gesture, but you fucked it by not drawing the feet. No matter how crappy they turn out, at least indicate them with simple triangles or some shit, it makes so much difference wheather a figure is planted on the ground or floating on the paper.
You want to someday make it? Exterminate those bad habits like some kind of nazi pest controller.

No it doesnt look okay and whatever you did you did not use boxes. Id suggest drop human figures for a while, get yourself something more abstract which your brain is not used to fuck up by interpreting - for example some kind of bulky beetles, crabs or something similar (they are all pretty much basic forms stacked together) and draw those things using boxes / cylinders etc
With animals you tend to not be so picky about every mistake and you start focusing on the construction part.
Once you get less overwhelmed by 3d forms give the human figure a try.

Pic related, give it a try.