/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3681296

Just a few examples. If sensuality is what you are going for, there is a subtlety that is absolutely necessary. you don't display the sensitivity of touch that evokes emotion. Your strokes are everywhere. Your palette across the paintings posted is inconsistent and unfocused. These few paintings I've posted are short on detail but big on composition and color. They are delicate even with thick paints and impasto. The figures are balanced and if they were actual 3 dimensional would stand without assistance. There's re to say but it's be a book worth of things just for you to say "your criticisms don't apply"