/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6089512
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>>6089546
if those friends were real you could pick up were you left off at any time. give your pal a call even they can't help you draw.

>>4842247
The problem is that all of it is lacking to the point that you're not excelling at anything, not just the anatomy which you seem to be focusing in on. Your perspective had no depth to it, you don't know how characters and objects work 3d space, you had zero understanding of lighting and value, and your inking and color is random because of this. When everything is poorly executed you only thing you will mainly take away from a project like this (were you have to have working knowledge of all of you fundies to make a good comic) is 'damn everything im doing is bad. Kinda of a no shit don't you think? Again, I'm not telling you not to make a comic, do the damn comic. What I'm saying is don't get caught up in not studying your fundamentals because you're working on a comic. Personally, I think you would get alot more from doing individual illustrations than a comic because you have more control of proiritizing what fundamentals you want to address at a time and increasing your odds of making well executed pictures rather than doing all of them once and making bad page after bad page and while not understanding what or why anything isn't working. Agian just my cents, take it or leave it.

>>4825008
Be honest with me anon do need the approval of other artist so badly? Your post reads as if you don't have goals, nor aspirations, and I don't know if you are aware, but any serious artist would find you to be a distraction at best and downright insufferable at worst because to them you're just some shitter dicking around while they're busting theirs to actually be good at their craft. What the hell do have to ofter to them? what will you actually willing to give to them? Actually, I got a better question- why do need people validate the work you do when you're just some hobbyist in it for fun? Why isn't your own feelings about your work not enough? Why are you even here?

>>4799307
Huion 22 kamvas was a piece of shit that driver failed often and completely broken within 1.5 year for me (the dials fail and within a month the displayed stopped registratung the pens). Artisul d13 was a piece whose drivers failed often and pens broke within 3 months of daily use, however the Artistul d22 is actually a good display if you dont care for shortcut keys, and the drivers never fail, almost no parallax. I like it alot. Oh and the iPadPro is memeware with shit battery and hellish storage functionality, haven't touched it since the april, and I didn't get a 12.5 in for $300 it would been sent packing. Invest in a PC/laptop instead.

>>4784155
Designing terms of making the silhouette interesting is how I like to go about, also draw inspiration from things you like and what sort of thing you think would look in your world. The claw arm is kinda cool start, but i think add some more metals in the outfit (maybe some hardtools in the hat or a belt made of keys or so metal kneepads) can make it cooler. Don't be afraid to think alittle outside the box.