/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3182788
head is too small and the torso is too long, specifically the bit below the ribcage. the pose implies that he's lying down on a flat plane, while he's supposed to be propped up by a wall. also, the forearm is a little bit longer. I cut and pasted things around a bit, mostly increasing the size of the head and bringing the chin down so it looks like hes pressed up against the wall, and bringing in the legs and rotating them to shorten the torso and make it look like hes resting one thigh on the crate. I tried fixing the forearm but Im not sure if mine looks any better