/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4937397
I see, I don't know how helpful I can be but here goes.
I can see what you did with the gesture, I also like the expression. If this was my draw and I had to decide what to work on, I'd chose the gesture.
You are already pushing gesture since you drew her running, plus her head's position and the floating hair.
But here's what I think. The position still feels a bit stiff. It kind of seems to me like she is suddenly stopping from running and if that was the case, I would maybe move her right leg a bit forward.
The third pic is how I would have approached that, notice I did the same thing you did with gesture (or at least I tried to), but pushed it further. In my case she doesn't seem to be running at full speed, I guess if you wanted to try that you'd need to push the gesture even further, but idk how to do that desu.
As for the style itself, since idk what you are aiming for, idk if what comes next is really helpful, so take it as you wish.
I would do fewer lines in general (most notably her neck and hair), since things tend to look simpler / cuter with fewer lines (I think there's a video by sinix where he covers that)
I also prefer to make girls not supper slim.
Again, idk if this is the kind of crit you wanted, but hopefully you can get something out of itm so let me know.