/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2882884
The trex arms are one problem, but it's mainly the entire pose that's the issue.

>>2882882
>contrapposto
"Contrapposto" = weight leaning on one leg. Which leg is your pose leaning on if they're both floating and broken?

Your pose looks like the one on the right. If you want her leaning, it should look more like the left. Weight supported on one leg, straight and pushing the hip up. The shoulder drops on that side which is where you drew her finger pointing.

Try to do the pose yourself. Lean on one side and point. You'll see how it works. You don't have to be a slender woman to figure that out.