/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4220080
Hi again Anon! Anon here who gave you crit on the orange haired girl awhile ago. I am really liking the way you drew this here is how I wold change it slightly I think the two eyes do not really match up in shape I tried to change the right side one to do, I placed the nostril a bit higher because I felt it didn't match the nose. I changed the shape of the neck because if you turn your head to the side the neck tendon becomes visible as it stiffens. Otherwise I added small things like trying to make the collar of the shirt more 3D shaped and some minor alterations here and there like the shoulder angle and stuff.

I agree with other anons that said that the body appears flat I might have go at the rest of the body a bit later.