/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6519592
The irises are different shapes and the shading/lighting of the eyes look wobbly (though the lighting principles are spot-on, it just looks rough). Honestly though, the eyes are not what sticks out to me here. The difference in line thickness really sticks out with the chin and it gives it a weird appearance. Also the alignment of the chin/mouth looks off and needs adjusting in lieu of the mouth shape. Honestly just from experience, getting that part right is one of the biggest hurdles for people aspiring to draw anime. Also when it comes to line drawing, if you're going for a rough sketchy style make it apparent, otherwise the rough edges on just comes across as laziness in people's eyes. Basically pick a style that suits you, whether it's more sketchy/freehand or if you want clean linework (I know it's a study but it's something to take note when you're finalizing your line art).

I apologize if I sound like I'm ragging on you, but I'm only critiquing because I can tell that you have potential in getting this right. Pic-rel might help in illustrating my suggestions. I made an edit with the adjustments but I feel bad about editing someone else's work without their permission unless you're okay with me posting it.