/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hey guys, still struggling with my Darkness. Anything that stands out? I know about the right plate being a bit longer, gonna fix that.

I've never done lineart, so wish me luck.

>>3024229
I'd suggest making the dark princess less contrasting, maybe bring the colors closer together and use softer edges there, so that the top princess is the main focal point and then your eyes slide to the lower one, instead of getting confused as to where to look first.

>>3024895
Nice. Make sure to really pop that arm by either blurring/desaturating the background or through aerial perspective.
At the moment it's a bit confusing, people might think it's a weirdly drawn ass peeking from behind the "I".

>>3024826
Lovely. You seem to be struggling a bit with mirroring (ears, hips, right arm is longer). Scott's "How to draw" has some really good exercises on that matter.