/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3173565
>thing more or two than this do.
No its not. You have NO sense of line weight and compared my mouths(pic) to your snek girl. I clearly have a more sense of 3d, like you can feel an opening on a cylinder. Yours feels like you made sure to have a 3d loomis head, but then just painted on a face.
>>3173554
Okay hot ship. Find me a reference image thats similar to this
https://a.pomf.cat/kdmjnf.jpg
>>3173565
but you clearly resent studying it in anyway. You have some sort of trigger that goes
>MANGA!?!
>NOPE NOPE NOPE, THEY ALL LEARNED FROM LOOMIS SO I MUST STUDY HIM ONLY
Which is why im telling you to just reading tokyo ghoul to get a better sense of mouths.