/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4236551
Pls gimme some critique/pointers: >>4237280

>>4236582
I like the colors and the sunken face actually, neck and arm look a bit weird tho. The neck seems very 2d and the forearm seems glued on like a prosthetic, but I'm sure you'll fix that soon.
Oh also, if that red thing on the tit is supposed to be the nipple then that placement seems off.

>>4237205
Will the peepee make it into the final image?

I tried rearranging the tentacles so they guide the eye back along the arms in a loop and added more ambient occlusion like some anon suggested. Someone else said I should make the skin wet, but I got no idea how to do that so I might try to dabble in that when I am otherwise finished.

For the face I tried to make her look a little bit menacing, but I don't think I succeeded. How could I improve on that?
Sadly I don't really know what else to specificly ask for help on since there really are a ton of things that trouble me, like the flow and rendering of the hair and rendering of the tentacles which actually seem like a good form study onto themselves which how much headache that gave me lol. Still haven't started the hands because I cannot do those from imagination and I haven't seen a good hand ref yet.