/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2917501
Here's my take on it. Lower center of gravity, visible arms spread to make it look more stable, less stiff yoga pose, more relaxed. Noticed emphasis on the legs so made the hair lead to it- emphasis on curves, curves, curves. Hair was asymmetrical so made it even more asymmetrical - to my taste really. Noticed a hair near the face and dot on the breast - thought they would look better repositioned as a strand near the mouth and a mole. I'll see if I can make a process of my coloring as well. Hope this helps.