/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'm pretty happy with the goth girl, but now I have to figure out basic anatomy I guess. I erased the legs like 8 times already, I'll try more tomorrow

I should place each drawing on a separate page, that way I can discard 19 monstrosities to each 1 decent goth girl

anyway, may I ask for some general advice or impressions? I also posted here >>6681934
but no one said anything. I realize most of the faces are bad but I'd appreciate hearing why, then I'll know what to focus on (my hypothesis is something wrong with the eyes usually)