/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6214091
Self critique is good, if you never think about your work you won't know how to improve.

At this point focus on the the spine and the centerlines since they are the most fundamental parts of the structure.

Generally your centerlines are not offset enough for the angled view and you were way too lazy with the spine on the box copy.

Your box pelvis is not tall enough (even after correction) and with the misplaced spine bend it looks like it is thrusting forward instead of backwards.