/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>inb4 outlines look like shit
I know, the defining lines of clothes and arms are way too thick and not smoothed out.

>inb4 coloring is off
Still working on a direction, generally throwing coloring until I find somewhere an artist that does a good job in simplified, yet effective coloring.

>Inb4 shading
I tried to shade, but something seems a bit off to me.

But I really wanted to see what you faggots think about the lips, especially the white glint, and generally how to apply glint?