/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6416506
I like it, but you broke the rule in the page before, from panels 1 to 2, and that's what's bugging me more.

The two characters are always facing the same side in every panel in this scene, and at the end of the page Nepheli calling the tarnished seems more of an extreme close-up from the panel before.

So, in my opinion, would be better to show the tarnished facing the other side (2-3).

Then I think would be nice to add some shots to show the tarnished reacting to Nepheli going kamikaze (6-7).

I hope it helps.